Knuxy
PAW Cub
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Post by Knuxy on Apr 10, 2016 21:58:17 GMT
Trying to work with what everyone has told me so hopefully you all see some improvement. Anyways, let me know what you all thought about this one! It's longer then usual lol.
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Knuxy
PAW Cub
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Post by Knuxy on Apr 12, 2016 18:58:57 GMT
Bump!
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Post by johnnyraike on Apr 15, 2016 2:05:24 GMT
I like the story you're doing with Knux, the whole burning the candle at both ends thing. I liked how amid all that Like was confident about the match, and my not, he had a streak going. I can't quite tell if I should see knux as a face who wrestles dirty, or a heel with good publicity.
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The Hard Core Society
PAW Camper
Equal Opportunity Hatred is so much easier than focused racial bullshit.
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Apr 18, 2016 8:15:18 GMT
I meant to give feedback way sooner, but just had too many issues and problems going on for me to focus. Now I'll admit, I'm more for promo than I am for CD in most cases, but I liked what was presented, even if it didn't link well to the promo. I always say you should tie in your CD bits with your promo if you're going for it somehow, like it's mentioned in the promo or the CD piece mentions your match and the struggle your character is having with it.
I do mirror Raike's view in that it's hard to tell if Knux is a dirty face or a heel with great PR. This could be a good thing or a bad thing as ambiguity can lead to interesting questions asked of the character and great developments. Downside is, it's a fine line to walk and can wind up biting you if not handled with great care. I personally see Knux as trying to be a good guy, but ultimately having more than a few negative traits that lean him towards that hard to tow tweener status.
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