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Post by The BombTrax on Apr 15, 2016 0:05:59 GMT
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Please give us feedback as this is the only way we can improve our results. Thank you.
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Post by Alex Blake on Apr 15, 2016 0:38:21 GMT
Favourite Character: Calvin came out strong, Raike had an excellent showing over the show, Alex Blake killed it on commentary  ? but I gotta give man of the night to Press. Favourite Seg: Press/Raike as well as the CJ/Redrum panty sniffer saga Favourite Match: Press vs Stevie II Favourite angle/storyline: Press/Stevie saga, followed by the close race for the #1 contender spot that's getting more complicated with every show. Show Rating: 9/10 Other: Contract signing was good and and bought up a good point, there's "invaders" and no one is doing anything... except for the Green Arrow  Solid debuts by Pixie, Nomad and Muru. Has Press accidently stumbled onto revealed Johnny Raike's revenge plan? Drew Stevenson in the building? Is there a 750 word limit RP title on the horizon? |
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Post by johnnyraike on Apr 15, 2016 0:41:25 GMT
Technically there is something being done about the invaders, it's just a slow moving scene.
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Tate
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Apply...Endure...and Conquer
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Post by Tate on Apr 15, 2016 2:55:47 GMT
Yes...slow burn versus fast heat...but that shouldn't stop anyone from joining in with any ideas...
Tate
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Post by Stevie Harris on Apr 15, 2016 6:23:28 GMT
Yo management, you gotta start bumping the show and cards when you make them public.
Yo efedders, you gotta start posting feedback or you're a bunch of dicks.
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Knuxy
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Post by Knuxy on Apr 15, 2016 15:22:59 GMT
Favorite Character: There was a lot of awesome showings, but I think I'm gonna' have to go with Raike as my favorite for the night.
Favorite Segment: I loved the Redrum segments and the segment with the invaders. I love those angles.
Favorite Match: Every match was written well, but without making my own match I'd have to go with the main event.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: The Stevie/Press saga
Score: (1-10): 9
Comments: Loved my match! Johnny did am awesome job. Shame the stream is over, but time moves forward! Was awesome to work with Jack and I hope we can do it again.
Also the Redrum segments had me laughing lol.
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Post by johnnyraike on Apr 16, 2016 6:39:38 GMT
I do have thoughts, but they'll likely need to wait til Monday. One of our best efforts so far, but I'll get to that later
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Muru
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Post by Muru on Apr 16, 2016 16:35:42 GMT
Here is my feedback...in a way that is not how it's supposed to me.
I thought the show was pretty damn good. As a whole I think the shows keep getting better. This one had a bigger overall feel than the super show in my opinion.
I was a big fan of the Calvin Harris segment. When reading it there were times where I was like...exactly. Especially when it came to the number one contender not getting the title shot with Stevie Harris getting another shot.
The main event was great though. I was personally pulling for Press to win clean so that ending made me say damn. I wasn't expecting it.
A lot of good debuts overall. When you have new talent come in and win their first week against top notch guys it's good for the competitiveness of the place.
I am one of the bigger Luke Knux fans here and I think the character gets better every week. Really wanted to see him get another win but Nomad brought it. I can't want to see what Knux has to say next week.
There were lot of good segments and RP all around this week. That along with the ooc atmosphere here makes me want to be part of the action.
I hope my Muru match with Richard Stone came off well.
The invasion angle really is a slow burn. I think the tough part for me is I have no idea who the characters are outside of what we have seen go down on the shows. That being said it's hard for me personally to see it as a big deal. It's the equivalent of a new guy coming in and talking about all the past accomplishments this audience might not know about. I'm not saying it is bad. I trust the people involved that it will all pay off in the end. Once I get a better idea on the characters that will probably help as well.
There is so much more that can be said about things. This place really is coming together nicely.
I want to thank everyone who wrote a RP and anything on the show. This place is a blast, and I'm glad to be part of it.
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The Hard Core Society
PAW Camper
Equal Opportunity Hatred is so much easier than focused racial bullshit.
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Apr 18, 2016 8:26:45 GMT
Favorite Character: I dig the showing made by Press
Favorite Segment: Press & Raike
Favorite Match: Harris vs Press left a good impression
Favorite Storyline/Angle: Going with Harris/Press storyline
Score: (1-10): 8.5 - Good strong show
Comments: The show was good but I'm still learning the characters, so I can't speak on the individual nuances in their match, but I felt Jack was rather surprising in the no-sell factor. I've always had him sell pretty solid, like a heel. Not weak, but not like a tank either. I guess we can play that off as Alexandra Kelly's toughening him up. Means I'll have to update his profile a bit to include this new tank-ishness he's put on display.
I was a bit surprised to win my debut match with Jack as it's felt almost like tradition for him to lose his debut unless he debuts against a no-shower as in the case of the last two feds he was in. Usually my character winds up putting over the established talent as a "Pay your due" spot coming into the fed, so I thank you for giving me a legit break from that tradition.
Anyways, looking forward to seeing more gang.
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Post by The BombTrax on Apr 18, 2016 19:15:48 GMT
I was a bit surprised to win my debut match with Jack as it's felt almost like tradition for him to lose his debut unless he debuts against a no-shower as in the case of the last two feds he was in. Usually my character winds up putting over the established talent as a "Pay your due" spot coming into the fed, so I thank you for giving me a legit break from that tradition. I hate that shit. A win is a win in my book, regardless of debut or established, or whatever. I know exactly what you mean though, as I've been on the receiving end of losses cause i'm the newbie. My vision for PAW is to see everyone have fun, a fair opportunity, and to improve as a writer. If someone, such as yourself, comes in and makes a wave by taking out an original, then I expect that original to take the lump, but to come back hard and strong in the follow through. If we're not here to not only compete, tell a story, and get better, then I don't much see the point. Congrats on your victory. |
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Post by Johnny on Apr 18, 2016 22:09:36 GMT
Hey, didn't want to sign in at my cousins house.
Favorite Character:
Johnny Sykes. Interesting that we're at a point where refusing to fight women is the heel move
Favorite Segment:
The attempts as the fire crotch panties and it's conclusion
Favorite Match:
The main event
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Interested to see what this week means for the number one contendership
Score: (1-10):
8
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Thought this was a really good show, tightly plotted and with good matches. As has been touched on, the GZW invasion feels like it's still waiting to happen. I'd like to see that kick up, and am willing to help. Looks to me like we might be heading toward the first PAW cage match for Press and Stevie.
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Post by Julian Justice on Apr 25, 2016 17:58:24 GMT
Favorite Character: Press & Calvin Harris stood out the most to me.
Favorite Segment: Press & Raike
Favorite Match: Main Event
Favorite Storyline/Angle: The Stevie Harris/Press situation.
Score: (1-10): 7.8/10
Comments:
I've been reading up slowly, and skipping around a bit. Mainly been reading in pieces. Focused on the feud with Press/Stevie Harris to begin with. Looks solid, really liked what I've seen from shows 1-7 and Show number 8 is the most recently read by myself, and I do believe it is a killer event. Keep it up guys. This place is only getting bigger and better with time. Matches were great and the story lines were well written out. A good flow to everything.
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? but I gotta give man of the night to Press.
