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Post by The BombTrax on Apr 29, 2016 1:56:04 GMT
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Post by Calvin Harris on Apr 29, 2016 5:07:07 GMT
Favorite Character: Jack Nomad (even though I fucking hate Baron Corbin's no chest having ass lol) Here has been here a couple weeks but I think he's making one hell of a impact. His roleplay was fantastic this week to begin with. Then his character just comes off like a complete and utter bad ass. Everything that Corbin should be in WWE, that's what Nomad is. He's got no problem hurting people and hurting them badly to get what he wants. Fucking loved the bit in his segment when he pointed out that role models don't last long. It just sold me on the character. Then of course he was written like a complete and utter bad ass by just decimating Al Envy in the match. Even though he didn't leave the winner. I loved how it was written that he was too busy destroying Trixie to realize the pin at first. Made his character come off real strong. And then to finish out his night. He beats the dog shit out of Luke. Yeah, I'm firmly behind the Nomad character.
Favorite Segment: I'd have to say my favorite segment would have been "The Box Office" with Luke Knux. Tbh, and this isn't a knock at anyone. So I hope it isn't taken as one. I didn't too much care for the Luke character before this. I guess I just never got the hype. I didn't understand the character and maybe I just haven't read enough before this time out. I just never got the whole rockstar thing. To me it was something that's been done before and doesn't seem to ever stand out the way people want. Though with this segment. It did stand up and it gave me a little more understanding of what Luke is all about. Plus, the "song" had me loling. At the same time though it kind of justified the assbeating he got later in the show. #iSupportHeels
Favorite Match: I am not one to put myself over. So, I hate choosing the main event because it involves my character. However hands down that was the best match on the card. In ladder matches there's always so many endless possibilities. Being someone that thoroughly enjoys writing matches like that just because of the spots that could come from it. This match was put together excellent. It showed the fight that Johnny and Calvin have in them. It showed that one man wasn't better than the other. It showed the hatred and the dislike they have for each other. It showed what the other was willing to do to the other just for the sake of winning. I lost my fucking shit over the Package Piledriver off the top of the ladder. I'd pop so hard to see Owens do that at Mania a few weeks back. Just over all a very good match and great story telling. Kudos to the person that wrote this.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: This week it has to be the whole invasion angle. For once the Press/Stevie/PAW Championship storyline didn't overshadow. Not it's a bad thing when it does. I mean it is for the biggest championship. That should always be the focus. I don't know the situation, but seeing as Stevie didn't post at all. It kind of seemed like there wasn't a lot of focus on that storyline in general. Then again like I said I don't know the situation and there could have been a reason. Nevertheless though the invasion story stuck out to me this week. A lot more people are coming in. A lot more people are getting involved. Stories are starting to develop with it. It's clear GZW are starting to take over a little bit more. It's making for some interesting stories and makes you truly wonder where things are going. So congrats to those people that stepped it up this week and brought that into light.
Score: (1-10): I'd give it a 8 1/2 - 9. There were just a few things missing for me for it to become an all out 10.
Comments: This was a very good show. Each show seems to get better and better each time it comes out. The show seems to be a little bit better than the show before. That's what I like! Keep it going guys!
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Apr 29, 2016 20:40:29 GMT
Well thank you dude. You know, it's nice being in a place where people understand you're playing a part. You're not actually hating on them or anything like that. Past places I went with Jack, it seemed the general consensus that people believed I was literally talking from my own point of view and legit hurling hate on them. I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or not, but man people used to give me soooooo much shit for this character. Again, thanks for the huge compliment.
Edit: As for the pic base, he's chosen partly because Jack is NOT a ripped son of a bitch like alot of wrestlers out there. He's the type that can bulk up, but for whatever reason, never could get that ripped, cut look. It's like not in his genetic coding or something.
Edit 2: Also, I'll have feedback tomorrow as I'm doing a shitload of writing today because I'm a procrastinating ass.
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Post by Calvin Harris on Apr 30, 2016 0:35:37 GMT
The Hard Core Society - I know what that feels like. I've been doing this for over 10 years. My ass should grow up and just retire lol. But I've had people truly come at me over in character comments and claim that's how I've felt in real life. It's annoying as hell. This is a game and I do it for fun. Don't get me wrong I openly admit that I can be a dick when the time calls for it. Specifically when I'm pushed but even then I just openly speak up about how I feel instead of taking the shady way and making it an "in character" situation. So, I would have no reason to believe that anyone is like that. And you're welcome. I truly do enjoy the character. I could see him being a mega "monster" like heel around here sometime in the very-very near future. Kuods man. Keep up the work.
And side note, it's all good why you chose the pic base brother. I get the logic behind it. That's what's up. Good to know a lot of people try and envision what their character is / what they look like before choosing a pic base... I just personally can't stand Baron Corbin. He looks awkward as fuck as far as his build goes for me. He's also a big cocksucker and the ego he has makes him very unlikable. Don't know if you ever watched Breaking Ground or not with the WWE Network. But you can see just how much of a prick he is and the ego he carries himself with. He thinks he's shit doesn't stink. I just can't stand him lol. But if he fits the character man. By all means roll with it.
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Apr 30, 2016 6:08:50 GMT
Well funny thing, I watched a bit here and there on Youtube. He asked Scott Hall why people suddenly turned on him when he was playing face and doing all this good, fun stuff. Scott shot back saying, "You think maybe it's because you come off as a bit of a dick?"
He just shrugged and nodded with acceptance.
Jack's gone through about four pic bases, each involving some accident that injured his face. First time, he was Austin Aries, but then I took a break for awhile with him, came back, and poof, everybody was using Austin. Second PB I can't remember because I can't find my old TSWF stuff anymore. So then I was gone for a long time, came back last year with Jack in Carnage and had him emaciated from two years of drug abuse, giving him Edsel Dope's pic base. Then had him gradually get over the addiction and after getting his face injured by falling off a titan tron during an ambulance match, face first, through an ambulance, well, he got facial reconstructive surgery done while he was in a short lived coma. Came out looking like Baron Corbin because they had very little information to work with. Unlike alot of people in E-W, I try to have a story and a reason for everything. You know, this is supposed to be a feedback thread, LoL.
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Post by Double F C on Apr 30, 2016 16:11:39 GMT
Favorite Character: There are always several standouts. I do agree that Jack Nomad showed well, also thought Kelsey Spencer brought some much needed Baby Face time to the card.
Favorite Segment: Raike's one-liners in the opening segment, as per usual, were on point and brought a few good chuckles. I thought the Red Dragon introduction was rather compelling.
Favorite Match: Every match was well written and thought out. Nice to see the flow that carries through each match, so it's difficult to claim one as a favourite, but I did think the opening fourway bout had a lot of momentously significant character-building points; they all did, technically. I'm just a Kelsey Spencer fangirl at this point.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: I think there's a rather lovely intricacy to the feuds going on in PAW. Stevie versus Press definitely does take the front seat in that department, but I thought it was neat to see the twitter interplay between Raike and Harris following the outcome of the Titans of the Midway championship match. I think there's some interesting things moving into the next Wicked to kee an eye that developed beautifully on this event.
Score: (1-10): 8
The Redrum panty-sniffing thing was strange and awkward to read.
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Post by admin on May 3, 2016 3:36:23 GMT
Favorite Character: I love the Jack Nomad character but Stevie is probably one of my favorites.
Favorite Segment: I loved the Box Office hands down. Luke Knux cracks me up!
Favorite Match: Lots of good ones not sure I had a favorite. I'm glad the Ladder Match was well received.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: I know too much >_<
Score: Solid 8. These shows are great stuff.
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Post by The Hard Core Society on May 3, 2016 21:14:54 GMT
Favorite Character: A toss up, I like both Stevie Harris and Press. They are great characters.
Favorite Segment: The one where Jack beat the fuck out of Knux. LMAO, Kidding! I dug the Box office bit and it made the beat down by Jack later on very much worth it. Paco, my friend, you have a gift. I enjoyed the work and look forward to more. Though just at thought, I would rethink any song that makes it sound like you want to ass fuck someone... just saying. Especially someone like Jack, LoL. Still made it funny though.
Favorite Match: Raike vs Harris in the Ladder match. The Finish off the ladder was well done and congrats to the new champ.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: Press and Stevie work off each other so well. I need to read up on the history between these two to better understand it, but it's good work.
Score: (1-10): 8.5 Only reason I go that way is there are a couple things on the card that had me scratching my head and I needed to have some of it explained in private, but other than that, solid show.
Comments: Not much to comment on, solid show, good angles and arcs at play. I really can't accuse anyone of half-assing anything, so no complaints either. Hoping Jack and Pixie kill it on the next show!
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