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Post by The BombTrax on Jul 22, 2016 5:06:19 GMT
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Equal Opportunity Hatred is so much easier than focused racial bullshit.
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Jul 22, 2016 8:14:29 GMT
Favorite Character: Strick. Just a wonderful simplicity to the character I can get behind. He strikes me as somehow laid back yet intense AF at the same time.
Favorite Segment: Sergio & Double FC's bit tickled me pretty good. I would count the Box Office as a good segment, but it became a DVD extra, so I don't know. Kinda' a toss up between the two.
Favorite Match: I didn't write it, so I can call this one. I actually favored the tag match with Bombtrax vs Harris & Nomad. It was a really solid back and forth encounter and It was really interesting to see how it got from the start to the finish line. Hooked me in fairly well for more reasons than just me being in it.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: FRANCIS CUPPOLA KILLED TONY HERO! OMG! WAS IT PLANNED? WAS IT AN ACCIDENT?! TUNE IN FOR MORE MOTHERFUCKERS! LoL. I actually got a kick out of that. It felt like such an oldschool angle and pretty unexpected. I don't know if this makes me jaded, but I've never seen anyone make a debut and instant swan song all at the same time. Dude didn't even get to throw a punch or anything. He smiled, waved, slipped on a bottle and shattered his knee into Obliticry. That my friends is a moment you'll never recreate without someone calling it a rip off.
Score: (1-10): 9
Comments: Excellent show. I enjoyed the read and found myself skimming through less and less as it went on. Each show is literally a progression of getting better. When the bubble does pop and we hit that peak show that nobody can ever top again, I can only hope and pray that I'm somehow involved in that great moment. Anyways, can't wait to hear everyone else's feedback. Hope Mercy & Sin were well received. If not, be sure to tell me what you didn't like. I'm open to suggestions and feedback just like the show is.
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Post by Annabel Lee on Jul 22, 2016 23:16:16 GMT
Favorite Character: Press has his fingers in lots of pies, and maybe it's just me but I feel like it's all leading up to something! Can't wait to see what it is. Favorite Segment: Francis Ford Cuppola and Rodney. This was just... eeeugh! I could picture how horrible all that half-eaten food looked. Favorite Match: PAW debuts match. It was awesome to see that everyone showed up and RPed for it! When there's a whole bunch of people that come at once you always wonder if there will be no-shows. Great job by everyone here and congrats to Anastasia Hayden!! Favorite Storyline/Angle: I'm still not sure what happened with Sasquatch and/or why Strick wrestled him, but I liked it! Score: (1-10): 8 Comments: There were some really great moments in this show, and a lot that left me going, "Well what happens next?!" so great job everyone. Any "complaints" or what not are just little nitpicky things that I can explain in a private chat if anyone really cares, haha. 
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Post by Double F C on Jul 24, 2016 15:36:03 GMT
Favorite Character: Cross Recoba is back  !!! Welcome back, to character and handler! In a field full of heels, Cross' return makes being a premier heel in PAW that much tougher, IMO. Favorite Segment: Strick firing Tony. I think the two are such interesting opposites, this made for a memorable segment. Honorable mention to Kelsey Spencer and Annabel Lee playing Pokemon backstage and giving an interview; was a nice showcase of their bonding, etc. Favorite Match: The PAW debuts was quite stunning. I don't think anyone can walk away from that match feeling undersold, or robbed. Congratulations to Anastasia Hayden for picking up the win. I think in a debut match of that caliber it's all-around good for everyone that everyone showed up with their game faces on. Definite match of the night. Favorite Storyline/Angle: I think the Calvin Harris and Press feud is playing out very well, with some nice heat building between the two to make Bad Moon Rising seem that much bigger. I'm interested to see what comes next there. Score: (1-10): 8.5/10 Comments: Positives: Strong matches. Always. I think there's a lot of great characters walking the IC halls of PAW right now, making for a really cool load of storyline options and matchup possibilities. This card exemplified the fact that we have an interestingly diverse array of archetypes. There's always a thread connecting the shows, and you can see it, and you can look ahead with anticipation and interest for what comes next. Negative: Every now and again there's a moment that draws you out of things. It's not often. But in the opening introduction we were in the Pure Arena, and then we were in LA again. I know why that's the case, and it's the nit-pickiest of details so as not to be a huge bother.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2016 14:30:54 GMT
Favorite Character: Cross Recoba gets the nod here, hell of a way to make your name known there.
Favorite Segment: Lee & Spencer's segment was pretty good.
"KELSEY SPENCER: You can download it on your phone, if you want! It’s free, if you don’t mind grinding to get items!
BRANDY IRVING: Erm… “Grinding”?
KELSEY SPENCER: It’s a gamer term. You know..?
Awkward silence."
Gave me a good chuckle. LoL
Favorite Match: Calvin Harris & Jack Nomad versus The BombTrax was a hell of a ride. A lot of great action and it really built where the mindset of Harris and Press will be come time for the big match. Also re-introduced Mr. Recoba well.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: Has to be Harris/Press. It's to the boiling point, we'll see what happens next.
Score: (1-10): Solid 9
Comments: Again, great continuity. There are a couple small things (Francis' handler pointed out the biggest one in the above post) but really they're small things to take away from a greater whole.
All the segments managed to be interesting and relevant except for maybe the Lione/Cuppola one, but hey, can't win 'em all, right?
I'm a bit disappointed in the Sasquatch/Strick match cuz it wasn't supposed to go down like that, so it ends up seeming to not make much sense. It would have, just sometimes you can't have your cake and eat it too. I plan on making up for that in the future, not going to say how, but just keep your eyes peeled.
Also I assisted by writing one of the matches, I'm not a huge fan of match writing, but I hope it came out alright.
Good job, all involved.
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Post by The BombTrax on Jul 27, 2016 19:10:32 GMT
I wanted to throw this out there, just for the sake of transparency. I'm to blame for those discrepancies at the start of the show, adding to the confusion of where exactly this show actually took place. That's 100% my bad. I'm in charge of editing segments, and being on the look out for that sort of thing, and I actually screwed the pooch by not paying attention to those details. I'm glad that everyone has been so forgiving of the fact, as it didn't take away from the rest of the show, but it hurts our continuity when they take place.
One of the number one issues we've had with Staff and Handler has been trying to figure out exactly where we are. Even though I'm the one who came up with the location list, and made it to where PAW would be branching out more to traveling locations, it's easy to forget that we're NOT at the Pure Arena. No excuse, but this probably comes from the fact that so many of our early shows were there. In the past I've caught things like that through the final read through before I post, but to be honest, I was so caught up in the story lines that are developing that I completely overlooked it.
I can admit when I screwed up, and so for that, I offer my apologies. I'll try to make sure those sort of discrepancies don't happen in the future.
This, for one, is the reason why Show Feedback is primarily important. It helps us to figure out what people are really liking, and what they aren't. I have always been one to want to improve my writing and our product, and criticism is the only way to me to do that.
Please, if you haven't left feedback for the shows, do so. It allows for a collective groan or hurrah, depending on the situation, and gives me an idea for what I need to be on the look out for in the future.
ALSO, just a quick reminder. There is a production script created for every show for a reason. Not only for signing up for matches if you want one, but to add pertinent information as it comes in. It also helps me to keep up with who has what, and that sort of thing. I try to update it as often as I can, but it is a secondary priority to the other tasks that need to be done around the site. Check back with that before you do a segment, as I will be adding a notes section that will say who will be unavailable for a segment. I don't want anyone wasting their time on something that could be avoided by just checking the Production Script.
Thanks everyone for your participation, and keep those segments coming. If you want to get involved with a program with someone message me on the boards or DM me on Twitter. If there is a predetermined story/match/segment that was discussed and agreed upon and it doesn't come through, I'm going to try and work around it the best I can regardless.
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!!! Welcome back, to character and handler! In a field full of heels, Cross' return makes being a premier heel in PAW that much tougher, IMO. 
