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Post by The BombTrax on Aug 19, 2016 6:04:06 GMT
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Post by The BombTrax on Aug 19, 2016 6:20:46 GMT
Seeing as I didn't write the whole show, and was a player, I feel inclined that I might add my two cents here. The size of this show had me constantly running around to different sections, placing, and coding, and adding endings so that a lot of things were as much a surprise to me once I finally got the chance to do the final read. Here's my answers. Favorite Character: Nova Wonder Favorite Segment: Francis/Sergio with an honorable mention to a departing Strick Favorite Match: There were a lot of stellar matches on this card. I'm extremely proud of Tag Team Turmoil and The Main Event, but those were marquis matches that required quite a bit of hustle. The sleeper match of the night, was probably Aokigahara Zombie and CJ O'Donnell. Masterfully written, and every impressive, especially since it was written knowing one of them wouldn't RP. Also...come on....Redrum fainting cause of Boris.  Favorite Storyline/Angle: The continued friendship and team work of Annabel Lee and Kelsey Spencer. They get over as super faces in a game where that is damn near impossible, and is very limiting. Also, the ongoing saga that is Tony Chu's band of misfits. Strick storms out, but he's already got him another person to work with, so we'll see how that moves along. Also Francis and Sergio parting ways. The culmination of Jack Nomad and The Shadow, which is one of our longest running story lines, and that hinged around that moment when Jack finally got his hands on the elusive man in the mask. Did Bane proud. Regardless of my involvement, I think I would be remiss if I didn't say Press and Harris. He and I worked really hard to give this match the heat the Championship deserves, and I think our RP's for that match reflected that as well. He pushed me like only one other person ever has thus far, and I'm looking forward to the rest of you coming at me just as hard. I can guarantee you, there are things in the works that will almost guarantee a new champion come the next PPV. Not saying I'm laying down, or anything, but I barely scraped by here, and if Calvin is involved, it wouldn't surprise me to see him be the one to walk away with it all. In order to get in on that match, it's going to take the best of you, and to be quite honest, all of you are extremely good, so that's saying something. Look for more to come in the PAW Storylines that will take place on this upcoming show. Score: (1-10): 10, but I'm biased. Comments: The show was officially 4 hours late, but it just couldn't be helped. I always try and deliver for you guys because of the hard work you put into the product. I wanted to say thanks to all the match writers, the judges, the guest judges, the people who submitted segments and went out on a limb and cut extra CD's. With the exception of 5 people, everyone came with their A game, even those involved in angled matches. That is something to be extremely proud of, and I'm excited to see where everything goes from here. Congrats to the winners, and to those that lost, it is what it is. Just remember that a lot of this heat will carry over, and for those that are done with this cycle, remember there's a whole new PPV to start building towards. Thank You. |
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Post by The Hard Core Society on Aug 19, 2016 7:05:54 GMT
Favorite Character:
Hate to copy cat, but holy Fuck Nova Wonder is a vocal rapist with how badly she bludgeoned Raike before the match with her words and then did the physical version of it that left him a bloody, unconscious heap in the middle of the ring. Calvin better hide his girl, because in-character, Jack Nomad is really starting to like her style.
Favorite Segment:
I surprisingly got chills reading the Deus reveal. I didn't read far enough back into PAW's history, but this guy came off badass like Darth Vader. Plus who else has the balls to staple notes to PAW's commander and chief? - Honorable Mention - The Bear causing Redrum to feint. Sorry, I died laughing.
Favorite Match:
I may have lost (painfully) but I had a blast reading the Tag Team Clusterfuck match. You say Turmoil, I say from personal experience, Clusterfuck. LoL. Every now and then, feds need a major clusterfuck match to write.
Favorite Storyline/Angle:
Deus and Press and this is only the beginning bro.... Only the beginning.
Score: (1-10):
9.73
Comments: Insane show, hard as fuck to write and the first one I ever saw break proboards word limit so Kudos to all who put work into it. At first I kind of took my loss in the tag tourney a little hard. Really put alot of thought into Mercy & Sin's roleplay and intentionally left a couple mistakes in because I felt that they should show some lack of polish. They are not promo queens afterall, but yeah... Just kinda' threw everything I had at the wall. At least they looked beastly in the match and were doing serious damage and they have a target to shoot for....
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Post by Hunter Storms on Aug 19, 2016 8:43:06 GMT
Favorite Character:
Aokigahara Zombie
Favorite Segment:
Francis/Sergio,always funny in some way
Favorite Match:
For me,it's a tie between Nova/Raike and the Tag Team Turmoil. Both matches had really awesome spots,especially the Turmoil with nearly everybody throwing themselves onto masses of bodies
Favorite Storyline/Angle:
Kelsey Spencer/Annabel Lee friendship. Everything they do just seems so cheerful
Score: (1-10):
9.5/10
Comments: Definitely one of best shows I've read in a long time from my experiences and really looking forward to great shows like this one.
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Post by Annabel Lee on Aug 20, 2016 15:55:30 GMT
Favorite Character: I'm really enjoying PAW's new lawyer Todd Reid so far! Favorite Segment: Munin telling everyone to just rip off the stapled note and them hesitating.  I could picture everyone hemming and hawing over "hurting" the boss and her getting fed up very easily. Favorite Match: I hate playing favorites.  Press/Calvin Harris was amazing though! Favorite Storyline/Angle: I'm glad that the Zombie/O'Donnell angle is over because I know how how frustrating it had to be for the staff to keep doing the story stuff when one of the handlers was AWOL. They did a great job with it even so, but now other angles with the handlers really participating can shine! Score: (1-10): 8.5 Comments: Great show all around. It was huuuuuuuuge! So big it broke all of the things! It's awesome how many segments and stuff the show has too because some place hardly anyone sends them in. |
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Post by johnnyraike on Aug 20, 2016 17:26:56 GMT
Favorite Character: Mercy and Sin. I dug the promo a lot coming into the show, and thought they looked pretty awesome in the match
Favorite Segment: Deus is back
Favorite Match: Tag team turmoil, thought it did well at making the tag division look strong.
Favorite Storyline/Angle: Kelsey and Annabell becoming THE scrappy face team.
Score: (1-10): 9.5.
Comments. Looking to see where things go from here, including for myself. Lots of endings on that show, so that's always fun to see who clashes next
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Post by Double F C on Aug 20, 2016 19:56:46 GMT
Favorite Character: I think Nova Wonder pulled out the nifty little ring entrance there that really cranked the amp on an already interesting match up to 11. Kudos! Favorite Segment: I liked the Jobber talent ransacking Munin's office. Favorite Match: There were a lot of well-executed matches on this event. As previously stated, the Zombie versus CJ match was really well done, especially for selling a handler who hasn't been present for sometime. This match showcased and sold both characters, and really culminated nicely after that feud. Zombie came out looking quite significant here. That said, those title matches, tho! Calvin/Press and Nova/Raike and Tag-Team Turmoil were quite awesome. Favorite Storyline/Angle: This show closed off a lot of things, and gave birth to new potential. Ana and Caroline, the Addiction main event competitors, each of whom formerly tagged together which might bring out some heat, Calvin's next move, Nova and Raike's heat seemingly only upping after the fact, etc. Well done, and I'm hoping all are encouraged enough to see the threads this show left that can lead to bigger and better, and badder things. Score: (1-10): 9/10 Comments: Only 260,000 words? Really? I'm remiss to read anything under 300k, tbth. But that's just me.  In reality, these are the things that stuck out to me. All the contributions were indeed awesome, but there were points between matches where it went to another match instead of cutting backstage for maybe a pre-match interview, or a continuation of some sort of story. This, imo, implied some missed opportunities for segments. And I don't mean that to be a derisive statement to anyone. The show had a lot of bang, but I felt still like there were some faces missing from around the roster in between matches doing stuff. That said, seriously this was well done. The match writers deserve a pat on the back here. P.S. :Remember when we used to wait for all the matches then two people would do all the commentary in one sitting? Imagine we did that for this show? GTFO(rofl) Dere's no smilies :-( |
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Post by Kelsey Spencer on Aug 21, 2016 4:13:52 GMT
Oh, boy... I've never, ever done one of these, so here goes! Favorite Character: Hard to pick just one... I'll say Jack Nomad, because of his general badassery (if that's even a word?). Favorite Segment: I liked the segment at the very end, with the note stapled to Munin's chest. Got a bit of a laugh outta that  Favorite Match: Definitely the Tag Team Title Match. Favorite Storyline/Angle: The champ getting floored by a shot with the brass knuckles. Can't wait to see what happens next! Score: (1-10): 8/10 Comments: Awesome read overall. Some parts I felt dragged on a bit, but that could've just been my own preference. At the end of the day, it was a great show! |
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I could picture everyone hemming and hawing over "hurting" the boss and her getting fed up very easily. 
Press/Calvin Harris was amazing though!
